User:Holagrad/Visual Cliff

This is page with the drafts and ideas of how and   plan on editing the Visual Cliff Wikipedia page. After here, improved versions of these drafts will be moved to the Visual Cliff's Talk page.

Editing Plan

We plan on clarifying if it is an apparatus or study, we have found that reading it can come off confusing. We are going to do minor grammar changes. There a few inconsistencies that we would want to make more clear to the general audience. We are also planning on adding a subsection under infant studies. There are a few studies that have been done that have used the visual cliff that we think are relevant to use as previous studies. We also plan to make the animal section smaller. We thought having a subsection for each animal is irrelevant. We also want to update the sources for the animal section and the visual cliff. User:HungryDesi/Visual cliff