User:Hollyb98/Meditation/Kennedif00 Peer Review

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(hollyb98)


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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I liked how you started off giving examples and definitions of your topic. For people like me, i think maybe breaking some more info down would be helpful just to understand a little more with the vocabulary and applying them to your topic. overall i thought your article is pretty thought out and well put.