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Article Evaluations:

Ailsa Mellon Bruce

-article begins with describing her mostly in relation to the men in her life

-only after describing her family life does the article move towards her donations and philanthropy

-not much is written about her personal life aside from marriage and children

-some of the works could be identified

-article could be split in biography then personal life

-identifies net worth of all family members, if possible, should identify her net worth

-only 2 references

-very little on talk page, but the article has been flagged for interest in multiple wikigroups

Rosalind Franklin:

-nice chronological order

-extensive biography

-talks about personal life after achievements

-talks about controversies after death

-clearly and quickly explains why she is notable and deserving of her page

-almost 300 citations and they appear to be consistent throughout the article

-extensive references and further reading

-listed as vital article

-discussion about religion in the lead paragraph - lead paragraph improvement team