User:HonchoMichael123/Rise of nationalism in the Ottoman Empire/Sourpatchkid10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HondoMicheal123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HondoMicheal123/Rise of Nations
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rise of the Ottoman Empire

Evaluate the drafted changes
I do appreciate the organization of the article. It makes easier for the reader to keep up with the all the sections.

Leads and Context


 * I feel like the section about the Early Ottoman Empire could be developed a tab bit more. Although what is written there so far is accurate, I wish you would go more into how the Jews in the Ottoman Empire have a better quality of life.
 * The sources that were used in this articles show a good range of years (from the 70s to the 2000s) so the information provided is current.
 * This article does fill the missing parts of context for the rise of the Ottoman Empire but it feels like something is missing. I'm not sure what is it
 * "He formed the World Zionist Organization and called for the First Zionist Congress in 1897. The Jewish - Ottoman Land Company was founded by Herzl. The objective was to acquire land in Palestine, for settlement of Jews, through political channels with the Ottoman Empire. " I personally would go into more detail about what the World Zionist Organization is and more into Herzl's impact into the rise of the Ottoman Empire.