User:Hongtc1999/Lophelia/L.J.Rogan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Johnkim5206


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Johnkim5206/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that all of your information that you'll be adding looks good and is written in a well balanced tone without much speculation or bias, but I would just say that you should make sure that you can actually put your stuff into the article and make it flow. It would probably help you to draft your edits into the paragraphs that they correspond to so that you can get a better look at your changes in the context of the paper, and it would certainly help us peer reviewers when looking at your stuff. In addition to this, you'll want to add citations to the end of whatever changes you make so that you can make the changes and have the sources to back it up. Overall, the information looks good and I think your contributions are helpful.