User:Hoobity Boobity/sandbox

Article Evaluation
Tidal heating of Io


 * Callisto is not actually relevant to the tidal heating of Io. I wouldn't mention it.
 * Does not talk about the most important cause of the heating: the 1:2:4 resonance of Io:Europa:Ganymede.
 * Awkward intro going between a moon (Jupiter's moon Io) and the Moon (Earth's moon)
 * Could clarify subject by mentioning the Galilean moons
 * It really seems like the second paragraph, which focuses on a study about volcano positioning, may be written by someone on the research team. The shift in position is a documented fact, but there are other possible mechanisms, proposed by other teams.
 * Link 7 attempts to take the user to an email inbox. Maybe this is some kind of shared folder, but it seems very unprofessional and sketchy.
 * There's a lack of primary sources. Some of the links reference science news sites about papers instead of the actual papers.
 * There is no talk page.