User:Hopemanning7/Timurid art/IslamicArt22 Peer Review

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Hopemanning7

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Overall, this is a well developed article. The content added is relevant to the topic and you helped to keep the tone of the article neutral. Perhaps adding an image to the Illustration heading (if discoverable) will help to further bolster this content area. In your Metalwork section, I would see about adding more context to the information mentioned bout gold and silver. It seems as if that additional point may be lacking. Under your History heading, I would see about providing more context (if possible) as to why the Timurids adopted Persian culture as 'their own'. Nevertheless, this is a great article and the sources are well embedded.