User:Hopemanning7/Timurid art/LaurenM247 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Hopemanning7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hopemanning7/Timurid art


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Timurid art

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hope, your contributions to this article look great! I think its really helpful that you edited so many portions of the article. The information you added rounds out what was already there and gives more context for the art to be considered. The architecture section is well written, and I think it was definitely something that needed to be added to this page.

In the metalwork section, the sentence "Additionally, gold and silver vessels required much craftsmenship" is a bit confusing to me. I think you could reword that to make your point a bit clearer.

Also, linking your work to other wikipedia pages can be really helpful for readers. Then, if someone is reading your article and is unfamiliar with some of the names or places that you mention, they could click the link and find information on another wiki page.

Overall, I think your page looks really good. The writing is neutral and informative and you added a significant amount of information to the page.