User:Hopper1828/Choking/Guo9810 Peer Review

General info
Hopper1828
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Choking

Lead
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Content
I like the summarized history section, especially how it establishes a timeframe and progression, but I'm not sure "retroactively seen" refers to or means in context. Is it like witnesses remember after the fact but don't usually notice/register during the event or was this statistic discovered through a retroactive study?

I also appreciate the statistics that you added in the Respiratory and Skin sections, as it may be helpful to contextualize symptoms that may or may not always be present.

Tone and Balance
I think that the content you added is written with an appropriate tone and neutral.

Sources and References
Everything added has a citation.

Organization
I like the organizational changes you made to the Signs and Symptoms section with the History section.

Images and Media
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Overall Impressions
I think that your edits have made it more clear for the reader what to expect when witnessing — sounds like details that would be helpful in identifying choking in the real world.