User:HornHopper3721/Phoenicia under Roman rule/Edward.kane11 Peer Review

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HornHopper3721
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 * User:HornHopper3721/Phoenicia under Roman rule - Wikipedia
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 * Phoenicia under Roman rule - Wikipedia

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The user created a page overviewing what Phoenicia looked like over Roman rule. They did a lot of background research and even included several references that are not directly cited in the page. This shows the depth of their research. There is a history section in their article that covers the entire period of Roman presence in that area. There was also a section that covered Roman temples in Lebanon. This section also looks into the vanishing of Phoenician culture and religious explosion of Catholicism. The article also included a lot of images of temples. Overall, this article covers a lot and gives the viewer a good amount of information on Roman occupied Phoenicia. It is a very well written and researched article. There is no inherent bias in the writing. The bibliographic sources are all legitimate secondary sources. Great job.