User:Horse DeWormer/Laini (Sylvia) Abernathy/AnnieZhou11 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Horse DeWormer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Horse DeWormer/Laini (Sylvia) Abernathy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Laini (Sylvia) Abernathy

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you've made a good start- if I were to suggest anything, it would be to really expand on and focus on her art style- who were her influences? What are some of her notable works?

I'd include some more information about her life.

Don't forget to cite everything properly at the end!

Good start! Don't forget to separate everything into sections.