User:Horse DeWormer/Laini (Sylvia) Abernathy/Mhelenap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Horse DeWormer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Horse%20DeWormer/Laini_(Sylvia)_Abernathy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Laini (Sylvia) Abernathy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, all the information you added was very well thought out and informative. Compared to the existing articles nothing is repeated and it doesn't sound redundant. The sources you used all seem to be credible and it is clear that the information you wrote about was learned from those sources. I think this content definitely will improve Sylvia's article and will give a better insight on her life and work. Really good information considering the limited resources on her and her husbands work! Looking forward to seeing your article and the existing one together!