User:Horseshoecrab3/Effluent/Gabbydh47 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Horseshoecrab3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Horseshoecrab3/Effluent?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Effluent

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The lead has been updated but the wording makes it a little difficult to understand what they are trying to say when they define effluent. There is no brief statement of what the article will include in the lead. I think the lead is concise and not too detailed and is a good introduction to what the article will be about. I think all the content is in a very neutral tone. Everything seems to be referenced and cited properly. There are several references that seem good and up to date. There is not any bias detected in the article. They did a good job of not seeming persuasive at all. The content was easy to read and follow. There were no images added. I did not notice any grammar errors or spelling errors. All the citation links I checked worked.