User:Hossamelganainy/Begumpur Mosque/FaridaElsefary Peer Review

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Hossam Elganainy
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Lead

The lead provides a brief description of the monument, and is written in a manner that reflects the overarching tone of the article. It is concise and useful.

Content

The content is relevant, thorough, and presented well to the reader. It mostly relies on the presentation of information about the monument, without clearly or significantly addressing Wikipedia’s equity gaps or any issues of underrepresentation. Still, there is a mention of contemporary issues related to the Begumpur Mosque, such as the origin of its patrons and the challenges to preservation.

Tone and Balance

There is no apparent bias in this article, as it mostly relies on explaining the landscape and architecture of the monument and its historic significance. There was no strong critical voice, although they did explore issues related to preservation, and the confusion related to the identity of its patrons. It presents itself as a useful resource for researchers, or even enthusiasts, eager to learn more about the Begumpur Mosque.

Sources and References

The links inserted to work, and reflect good usage of complementary wikipedia sources to deepen readers’ understandings of key terms. There is a reliance on credible, scholarly sources although they have not diverged much from the original sources provided in the original Wikipedia article.

Organization

The content is well-organized, concise and easy to understand. It is written in a clear manner that does not confuse the reader. No grammatical or spelling errors were observed.

Images and Media

Images and media complement the article really well and the addition of the gallery is impressive, so overall there is strong visual aid that benefitted the article.

Overall Impressions

The article is easy to follow through, without compromising the quantity and quality of the information provided. Perhaps a brief discussion on the cultural/political significance of the monument would have been an interesting way to compliment the well-formulated description of its architectural and historical significance.