User:Hossamelganainy/Begumpur Mosque/N hatem2001 Peer Review

General info
Hossam El-Ganainy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hossamelganainy/Begumpur Mosque - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead is updated and brief. It doesn’t delve into unnecessary details and is straight to the point. The lead, however, doesn’t provide a description of the article’s major sections.

Content

The content is relevant to the topic. I just think that the geography section is unnecessary. The content is diverse and discuss many aspects about the building however, the most important sections (interior and exterior details) are briefed and not very detailed.

Tone and balance

The article is neutral and has no viewpoints; it is only stating historical facts.

Sources and References

I see a lot of resources but some of them are redundant. However, the rest are relevant and scholar and provide sufficient information to rely on.

Organization

I like the organization. The article is divided into sections, and I didn’t see any grammatical errors. Great job.

Images and media

There are a lot of visuals, and they are well captioned but none of them give credit to the original photographer or the reference where they were obtained.

Overall impression

The article has many strength points. Great Job.