User:HotFromTheTop7/Rainbow Coalition (Fred Hampton)/Sasquatchpedia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HotFromTheTop7, MysteriousAxolotl, Swishpot


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HotFromTheTop7/Rainbow Coalition (Fred Hampton)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rainbow Coalition (Fred Hampton)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

How much to focus on individual vs the party itself?

What they accomplished vs the mission?

Any loose ends?

Is it concise?

Does it add substantial and pertinent information?