User:Hotdawgluver420/Supersaturation/Thejigglyjello Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bouchiechan, Jerms24, Hotdawgluver420


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hotdawgluver420/Supersaturation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Supersaturation

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

Lead has yet to be updated for Supersaturation

Content

Content is missing from the article

Tone and Balance

Content added is neutral and not biased

Sources and references

No new references have been added to the article

Organization

Article is missing a few subsections that are present in the original article but not in the updated one.

Images and Media

Missing images or media

Overall Impressions

A good start but could use a bit more content.