User:Housnerisabel/Disability in the media/Osewanne Peer Review

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Lead Section

The lead section was good, it starts out with a clear thesis and allows the reader to know what direction this article is going to go in. I would consider defining this topic or providing a little bit of background for those who are unfamiliar with this topic. It is concise and well worded.

Content

The content in this article was well organized and touches on each subsection. I would consider writing a conclusion to summarize what was previously discussed, however, this is an easy fix and one i'm certain can be done. Everything touched upon was relevant to the topic and served the purpose of the article.

Tone and Balance

Tone is rather neutral and simply works to inform the readers about the topic. I thought it was respectful throughout and helped readers who might not know or have never heard about this topic gain a better understanding.

Sources and References

This article presented a good amount of sources for its length and content and for the most part, there are all from within the past couple of years.

Organization and writing quality

There were a good amount of sections to support this topic and further explain how Disability in the media can be negatively portrayed or skewed.

Images and Media

This article only contains one image. It is a rather old source from 1889 so I would consider finding something more contemporary and relevant to today.

Talk Page

The talk page has a few good discussions and contributions. It gives a few counterarguments to some of the points made in the article.

Overall Impressions

Overall, this article is good at presenting information and getting to the point. The article also does a good job by highlighting different forms of media not just the news like artwork, film, etc. I would consider expanding more on the topic and adding more recent pictures!