User:Houstonsown/St. Ann St./Thenoirroze Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Houstonsown


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Houstonsown/St. Ann St.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead sentence is good, but the lead section seems to be a bit too short. It would work better for the overall structure of the article to merge the background into the lead of the article. The history section could use some hyperlinks to articles about major faces that are mentioned (St. Ann, Jesus Christ). The history section is missing history about the street itself, it would be a great help to the article to stay on that topic. Overall there are very few grammatical errors within the article itself but it would be a great help to add information about the street itself.