User:Hoyae24/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Recycling in Taiwan
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead of the article has room for improvement as the introductory sentence does not encompass how much of an impact the efficient recycling system of Taiwan has had on the country. It does not include brief descriptions of the article's major sections.
 * The content is not as up-to-date as it should be as their have been many articles published recently praising Taiwan's recycling system. There is content missing in regards to worldly views of their recycling system. There are missing items on what is recycled and exactly how the recycling system works.
 * The article has a neutral tone and does not contain heavily biased information toward a particular position.
 * The information is backed by sources; however, there is not that much information and I believe there should be more sources to support this article. Sources are mostly current with the oldest article being published in 2013. The links do work.
 * Somewhat organized however this aspect is limited because of the lack of information about the topic in the article.
 * There is only one image of a "recycling box in Taipei" which serves to support the article.
 * My overall impression is that there is a lot of room for improvement of the article especially with the environmentally friendly stance that the Taiwanese government has taken in recent years.
 * Lead Content Tone and Balance Sources Organization Images and Media Overall Impression
 * Sources
 * "Taiwan/China: Taiwan's Recycling Prowess Praised in WSJ." Asia News Monitor, Jun 30, 2016. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F1800230598%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * "Taiwan/Republic of China/United States: US Smithsonian Magazine Praises Taiwan's Recycling Success." Thai News Service, Jan 09, 2019. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F2164673732%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * "US Smithsonian Magazine Praises Taiwan's Recycling Success." Taiwan Review, vol. 69, no. 2, 2019, pp. 9. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F2190065783%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * "Taiwan Province of China : Taiwans Recycling Achievements a Boost for Circular Economy." MENA Report, 2018. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F2081886119%3Faccountid%3D11091.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Brodie Smith (ultimate)
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead of the article serves the article well as it does a solid job at introducing the topic at hand.
 * The content of this article is not as up-to-date as I would have expected as their is a lot of missing information on his Disc Golf career and what he has done already in impacting the community. Furthermore, there is not that much information on his social media presence and how he has helped in popularizing both Ultimate Frisbee and Disc Golf.
 * The article has a neutral tone and does not present any form of bias in my opinion.
 * Information on ultimate frisbee career is up to date and well sourced. There is a lack of information and sources on his disc golf career. The links do work.
 * The information is well organized in the information that it has presented.
 * There is only one headshot of Brodie Smith for the article. There should also be photos of him playing either Ultimate or Disc Golf included in the article.
 * My overall impression is that there is a lot of room for improvement for the article especially the lack of information it presents on Brodie Smith's recent transition to becoming a PDGA player.
 * Sources
 * https://www.pdga.com/player/128378
 * https://discgolf.ultiworld.com/2020/01/18/brodie-smith-disc-golf-waiting/
 * https://parkeddiscgolf.org/2020/01/20/three-reasons-brodie-smith-could-be-a-game-changer-for-disc-golf/
 * https://austinultimate.org/community/scoober/october-2012/a-chat-with-brodie-smith-21

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Diponegoro
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead of the article serves the article well as it does a solid job at introducing the topic at hand.
 * The content of this article is up-to-date; however, there is information missing on the Diponegoro war that can be added to.
 * The article has a neutral tone and does not present any form of bias in my opinion.
 * Information is well sources and the sources that are presented in the article are scholarly and up to date. Facts presented in the article are backed up by reliable secondary sources of information. The sources do in fact reflect the available literature on the topic. The links do work.
 * The article is well organized in a somewhat chronological order from transitioning from Early Life, relations with the Dutch and his capture. These topics serve well in presenting an easy to follow way of highlighting the life of Prince Diponegoro.
 * The images presented serve well in supporting the topic. Each section of the article has at least one image to support the information stated.
 * My overall impression is that this article, although rated start-class, serves its purpose of presenting the information of Prince Diponegoro; however, in further analysis of the article I noticed there are certain components of early life that can be further researched and added on and more information about the Diponegoro War (Java War) that should be presented in the article to give a more full presentation of the topic at hand.
 * Sources
 * JUSTUS M VAN, DER K. "PRINCE DIPONEGORO: PROGENITOR OF INDONESIAN NATIONALISM." The Far Eastern Quarterly (Pre-1986), vol. 8, no. 4, 1949, pp. 424. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F232767342%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * "Indonesia: Prince Diponegoro's Kris Aligns with Historical Records." Asia News Monitor, Mar 16, 2020. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F2377093927%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * Destiny: The Life of Prince Diponegoro of Yogyakarta, 1785-1855. vol. 1, Ringgold Inc, Beaverton, 2014. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F1651918502%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * https://academic.oup.com/ehr/article-abstract/XCI/CCCLVIII/52/550610?redirectedFrom=fulltext
 * https://academic.oup.com/ehr/article-abstract/XCI/CCCLVIII/52/550610?redirectedFrom=fulltext

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Margaret Boyle
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article does not have a defined lead section. The introductory sentence of the article serves well in presenting who Margaret Boyle is and where she works. There is much improvement necessary to expand on the lead section of the article in terms of both organization and information.
 * The content of the article is up to date with additions to the article being made as recently as yesterday and all of the sources added to the article were done so in the past two days as of 10-31-2020. The links to the sources do in fact work with sources stemming from institutions such as her work place, Bowdoin College.
 * The article consists of a neutral tone and does not present any form of bias in my opinion.
 * The article presents no sense of organization as the information is not presented in sections. There is much improvement needed in terms of organization.
 * There are no images for the article.
 * My overall impression of the article is that this is a fairly new article as all the sources mentioned in the references section were retrieved just two days ago. With this said, this article presents much needed improvement. Most sources that I found stemmed from Bowdoin College.
 * Sources
 * Campbell, Jodi. "Unruly Women: Performance, Penitence, and Punishment in Early Modern Spain." Left History, vol. 20, no. 1, 2016, pp. 139. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F1866500337%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * Seagraves, Rosie. "Unruly Women: Performance, Penitence, and Punishment in Early Modern Spain." Bulletin of the Comediantes, vol. 68, no. 1, 2016, pp. 223-225. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F1809569079%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * https://books.bowdoin.edu/book/unruly-women-performance-penitence-and-punishment-in-early-modern-spain/
 * https://www.bowdoin.edu/profiles/faculty/mboyle2/index.html
 * https://www.bowdoin.edu/news/2017/04/romance-language-professor-wins-book-prize.html
 * https://www.bowdoin.edu/art-museum/exhibitions/2013/how-she-should-behave.html

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Cory Silverberg
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article presents a mediocre lead section where there is room for improvement in terms of guiding the reader of what the rest of the article is about. The introductory sentence serves the article well in its simplicity.
 * The content of the article is up to date with sources that have been retrieved as recent as late 2019. There is room for more content for the article, especially in regards to how his books have been challenged in mainstream society. There should be more content and information about his book Sex Is a Funny Word: A Book about Bodies which was one of the top 10 most challenged books in America in 2019. Criticisms of the book should be noted within this article.
 * The article contains strong sources but there is room for more. Links do in fact work.
 * The article does in fact consist of a neutral tone as there is not really a sense of criticism towards Silverberg and his writings. With this, there is no form of bias.
 * The article is somewhat organized; however, there is room to add more sections to this article to support the topic at hand.
 * There is only one image for the article which is a headshot of Cory Silverberg.
 * My overall impression of the article is that there needs to be more information on his books. There are no wikipedia articles specifically about his books so this article should present information on why his books have been challenged in American society. Furthermore, there are a lot of sources in regards to his books which should be added to the article.
 * Sources
 * Fitzpatrick, Anna. "New Approaches for Spelling Out Sex; to Aid Parents Fielding Kids' Questions about Sex, Cory Silverberg's New Book for Preteens Eschews both Euphemisms and Prejuidice." National Post, Oct 03, 2015. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F1718795306%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * Kerr, Theodore. "Cory Silverberg : On His New Book 'Sex is a Funny Word' and Sex Education for Kids." Lambda Literary Review, Aug 19, 2015. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F1705975826%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * Ojanlatva, Ansa. "Miriam Kaufman, Cory Silverberg, and Fran Odette (Eds) the Ultimate Guide to Sex and Disability: Cleis Press, San Francisco, 2003." Sexuality and Disability, vol. 24, no. 2, 2006, pp. 121-123. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F235719400%3Faccountid%3D11091, doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.1007/s11195-006-9011-y.
 * Canton, Jeffrey. "What Makes a Baby." Canadian Children's Book News, vol. 36, no. 3, 2013, pp. 36-37. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F1458288576%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * Hamilton, Gail. "Sex is a Funny Word: A Book about Bodies, Feelings and You." CM : Canadian Review of Materials, vol. 22, no. 7, Oct 16, 2015, pp. 1. ProQuest, http://proxy.library.georgetown.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Fdocview%2F1727398242%3Faccountid%3D11091.
 * http://www.ala.org/advocacy/bbooks/frequentlychallengedbooks/top10
 * http://www.ala.org/advocacy/bbooks/frequentlychallengedbooks/top10