User:Hprice1986/Tender is the Flesh/Aml9x Peer Review

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Hprice1986, Dmiksa, Alg9f


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Overall:
This is a good representation and description of the book. I like the sections that you have, but you are missing and info box about the book. There are definitely grammatical errors and some things that need cleared up. I can give specifics if you want.

Lead
Your lead looks really good. It is short and descriptive, but not a spoiler! If there is already a Wikipedia page about your author I recommend linking it. (In general if there is a page about it, link it). I think you are supposed to italicize your book name.

Content:
You have a lot of good content. I do not think anything needs added.

For the Plot Summary Section I might work on trying to make it flow a little more. It seems choppy and kinda jumps around. Like you will be talking about something with the meat factory and then there is a random sentence about his father. I think you could also pare it down some. I know it is so hard to make it shorter, but it is a little lengthy. If you really feel like you can't take anything out, then just make the grammatical and flow changes.

The Characters and Themes sections look good. I might try to find a little more content for your themes section though. Especially for the theme of cannibalism. That seems so important to the book, but you just have two sentences.

The Critical Reception section has so much good info in it! There are some grammatical mistakes there too, but over all you did a good job of getting multiple views on it. The only thing is that you are not allowed to use direct quotes and you have one in the last line.

Tone and Balance
You do a great job with keeping a neutral tone, especially in the themes section, so bravo!

Sources and References
I think you did a good job with having a variety of reliable sources. You also did a good job at putting them in the seemingly appropriate places!

Organization
I like the order of your sections. Again there are some grammatical issues that I can point out later if you want.

Images and Media
There is a lack of images or media. I am sure there isn't much that you could add images for, but maybe the book cover (under fair use), or an image about one of the themes. As I mentioned earlier you also need an info box (where you could put the book cover image).