User:Hprior/African heavy metal/Carolynyoung31 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? HPrior
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Hprior/sandbox

Content:
==== The added content was very relevance and up-to-date. I saw a lot of sources from 2020. My only comment is that it's a bit lopsided because you focus more on specific countries while leaving other countries with less information. However, I think this is totally understandable since you are covering a large number of countries. However, if there is a reason you highlighted some countries more than others, maybe explain that. For example, if those are the countries where heavy metal is most popular/prevalent then you could add that statistic. ====

Tone and Balance:
==== The tone that you use is very neutral and well-done. You struck the perfect balance with tone, especially when talking about the controversy surrounding heavy metal in some regions which easily could have wandered into an argument or opinion. The only possibility of bias is regarding the sort of lopsided coverage of countries, like I mentioned above. ====

Sources and References:
==== The sources seem good. My only criticism is that you seem to rely on popular news sources for a lot of information and so I would make sure that there aren't other academic sources that you could use alongside the popular news sources for more of a balance. ====

Overall impressions:
==== Overall I thought this was a great article! The topic was interesting and I especially liked the information about community reaction and controversy. I definitely think that the article is more complete and that the content improved the article. ====