User:Hreuter4/Plateau pika/Krhagan Peer Review

Yellow Hreuter4!

Plateau pika

I think the first thing I noticed was the lack of format which I'm sure was just because this is a draft, however, make sure to add the proper heading with the line underneath according to the section that is being added

for example:

Role in the ecosystem
While the information seems useful to the page, the grammar could use some light work, for example the first sentence seems to be run on, try dividing it into two or even three separate sentences.

I noticed that the wiki page also lacked a see also page so maybe you can add that.

If you wanted you could also add a few hyperlinks to related subjects ie. keystone species

Just little aside, make sure that the dates are added to the end of your references, some of them are lacking that information.

The following sources may be helpful in finding information to aid in the advancement of this page...

On the history of the plateau pika

On habits and sociability of the pika

. On the importance of the pika as a keystone species (its trickle down effect)

Overall it was a swell addition to the pika page, keep up the good work.

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