User:Hreuter4/Plateau pika/Madisontate1 Peer Review

Dear Plateau Pika Editior,

new source: Harris, Richard B., et al. “Evidence That the Tibetan Fox Is an Obligate Predator of the Plateau Pika: Conservation Implications.” Journal of Mammalogy, vol. 95, no. 6, 2014, pp. 1207–21. JSTOR, http://www.jstor.org/stable/24575521. Accessed 23 Mar. 2023.

The first sentence in your edit is a run-on and needs to be split into two sentences. Maybe section your paragraphs into different sections for the page, add headers to differentiate. Some examples could be "conservation efforts" "plateau pika" "additional information" "research" and more. You could add some hyperlinks to make the page more interesting if the reader did not understand a term. What you have is good but sectioning it would be more visually appealing. Maybe add a picture because they are cute. Overall a good edit.

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