User:Hryck/Villa La Rotonda/Isabelaz Peer Review

General info
Hryck
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hryck/Villa La Rotonda
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Villa La Rotonda

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like your contributions are very pertinent to the article! However, the "Inspiration" section is a bit hard to follow, even what was already published. It's confusing for the reader when different Villas like Capra and Emo are simply mentioned without proper distinction or explanation as to why they are relevant. I think you could do a better job at organizing that paragraph for an easier read.

This section: "Though the Villa is symmetrical on all sides, there is evidence that the northeast and southeast facades were slightly favored as actual entrances to the building. This is evident in their ascents to the building and the pattern of use in the grass surrounding the building." feels a bit like an argument. You could change the diction for it to be more neutral.

I really like the part about the changes made to the Villa. If you could find more about that, it could be an interesting new subsection.

Make sure you cite your sources in-text and add hyperlinks to things you haven't mentioned before and you think the reader would benefit from learning more about.