User:Hschmidt2/Emergency childbirth/Haleygamboa Peer Review

We think that the first paragraph could use a bit more information, meaning just summarize the important parts of the sections that would be necessary information for the reader to know immediately upon accessing the page. I think the background covers some of this information, so maybe it is not necessary to have an intro and a background section?

Other clarifying questions for the intro:

Are there risk factors that lead to emergency childbirth?

What gestation time does this normally occur?

We think the above could be important parts to touch on for the introduction if people want to know how to prevent it and need to know this information in an emergency situation.

Also,

Does delivery of the baby happen similarly to full-term childbirth?

How common are babies born in other positions? Is the risk of this happening increased with emergency childbirth?

The content is super organized and there are a lot of areas to find more information if necessary!! The language is very precise and understandable.

General info

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