User:Hthrxlynn/A Rape in Cyberspace

Edits to Make to This Article

 * FIX REFERENCES SECTION TO INCLUDE SHORT REFERENCES
 * Article needs more sources to back up information.
 * Article should probably have a section dedicated to its influence on other significant people in the field. I guess I can modify the "Legacy" section to fit this need.
 * Claims in the talk page need to be investigated.
 * Article needs to be made more relevant with more context to the situation and why it matters in media studies.
 * Maybe add a subsection about influence of this situation. What impact it had and why people are still talking about it.
 * Cynthia Bradley Johnson reference (3) broken. Unable to find more information about the situation or her writing about it. Looks like the journal it was published in was deleted from the server. Delete if unable to find more info after more research.
 * Reference (3) doesn't make sense. The article it's linked to has nothing to do with what is discussed in the article. Looking for something else to backup the claim made.
 * MIT link also broken. Searching for correct article to back up information in order to cite correctly. Looks like a conference is what is being cited here. Searching for information to back up claim on that website.
 * Found out that the article was subject for deletion in 2006. Using the discussion page about it, I am going to try to address the concerns of why it was going to be deleted.
 * There are literally zero references in the summary section... do something about that.
 * Trying to find anything that says that Pavel was on a business trip?? Can't find evidence of that.