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Topic paragraph
I chose the topic "Language policy in Education" for Indonesia in Asia because it concerns me. I come from that country and feel that the issue of language, especially postcolonial, is an exciting topic. In addition, I am a local language user from more than hundreds of languages ​​in Indonesia. By discussing this topic, I hope there are things I can make to make people know about the history behind Language Policy in Education in Indonesia.

Annotated bibliography
Maryanto. "Language Policy in Indonesian Education" (PDF). Indonesian Journal: 1 – via Pusat Bahasa, Depdiknas.

Hamied, Fuad Abdul (2019). "Policies on language education in Indonesia". Indonesian Journal of Applied Linguistics. 9: 308.

Kohler, Michelle (2021). "Language education policy in Indonesia –a struggle for unity in diversity". University of South Australia: 1.

Setyabudi, Titis. "Language Policy in Indonesia" (PDF). International Conference on Science, Technology, and Humanity: 165.

Rahmi, Rahmi (2015). "The Development of Language Policy in Indonesia". State Islamic University Ar-Raniry Banda Aceh. 3: 13 – via Englisia.

I chose these five journals because they describe the big picture of the topic. I found it on many sources on the internet, especially google scholar. The Journal with the title "Language Policy in Indonesia" by Titis Setyabudi clearly explained language policy in Indonesia from a legal perspective. While in the Journal with the title "Language Policy in Indonesian Education: Regional and Local Languages as Oral Languages of Instruction" has the Historical Perspective of language in Indonesia. "Policies on language education in Indonesia" Journal mainly provides information about future possibilities regarding Indonesia's place, status, and roles as a foreign language. "Language education policy in Indonesia–a struggle for unity in diversity" journal described the condition in Indonesia with diversity. How Indonesian managed to become unity. "The Development of Indonesian Language Policy in Indonesia" journal would be a great source to explain how Indonesia has successfully implemented language policy by choosing the Malay language as its national language, which enables to unite ethics from a variety of vernacular backgrounds.

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Contents

 * 1Language Policy in Indonesian Education
 * 1.1The place of specific language in education
 * 1.1.1Indonesian
 * 1.1.2Local language
 * 1.1.3English
 * 1.2The challenge of language policy in Indonesia
 * 1.3The future of language education policy
 * 1.4References

Language Policy in Indonesian Education
"This article is about the language policy in Indonesian Education. For an overview on education in Indonesia, see Education in Indonesia."Local languages in one of the regions (Northern Sumatra) in Indonesia About one-seventh of the equator is occupied by the archipelago of more than 17,000 islands that make up the Republic of Indonesia. Over 225 million people live in the archipelago. "Bhineka Tunggal Ika" or Unity in Diversity is the Sanskrit message that Indonesian people share with each other. In spite of this, they have a variety of ethnicities, religious beliefs, and languages. In Indonesia, there should be more than 1000 languages spoken at home by children as their mother tongue or what prefer to call their home language. Indonesia has determined its national language policy in a highly successful manner, unlike other multilingual nations such as India and the Philippines that have struggled with socio-political problems due to the adoption of a single national language. During the historic event of the First Congress of Indonesian Youth in 1928, Bahasa Indonesia was made public as the national language for this archipelago country and was later affirmed when the first language congress was held in1938.

The place of specific language in education
Bahasa Indonesia has historical and symbolic value for Indonesians as the language of national unity and independence from colonial rulers. After the independence period, Indonesian played an essential role in all government administrations, businesses, media, and as a medium of official instruction in all schools, with many other schools continuing to use the local language. In this case, schools are the mechanisms that shape national language standards, but not just Indonesians featured in language education policies.

Indonesian
Indonesian as The language of unity is the language that they will speak in every school in Indonesia. Indonesian can use the regional language in kindergarten and the first three years (Regulation No. 4, 1950, Chapter IV part 5).

Local language
The maintaining of "bahasa kita" above "bahasa kami" doesn't imply that the neighborhood language is then wound down. Most neighborhood dialects, nonetheless, stay in a minor position and some have proposed that the nearby substance prerequisite to a great extent served to advance the spread of English to the detriment of neighborhood dialects, because of interest from the local area, bosses and states.

English
The instructing of English in Indonesian schooling began in the college area with the foundation of an English language program at Universitas Nasional Jakarta in 1949.The inclination for English was generally a philosophical one as at first English was not related with previous colonizers and later Suharto was emphatically lined up with the West and viewed English as vital for solid monetary ties. Indeed, the help for English during Suharto's Presidency was entirely solid, to the point that English divisions developed from 15 to 106. English has been embraced as a mode of guidance close by Indonesian in tertiary levels through bilingual/drenching advanced education programs starting around 2003. But English has been acknowledged by a gigantic number to be a critical language to figure out how to participate in globalization, the public power's attitude doesn't show a ton of help for including English as a piece of its language procedure. To the potential gain of Bahasa Indonesia, the use will proceed to create and unsurprising execution of the language methodology will ensure its procedure with progress.

The challenge of language policy in Indonesia
The policy of language in Indonesia in general policy is quite elaborate. As described in Government Regulation of the Government of the Republic of Indonesia Number 57 of 2014 Development, Development and Protection of Language and Literature, and Improvement of Indonesian Functions, where Article 36, which began in the 1928 Youth Pledge, continued in the 1945 Constitution. The change period in Indonesia, which started in 1999, has carried with it a decentralization of instructive administration. This adjustment of how instructive issues are overseen has been important both as far as strategy making just as strategy execution.

The future of language education policy
The issues that are critical to be reexamined by Indonesian methodology makers are the means by which huge overall language like English can be installed even more unequivocally, especially in guidance so Indonesians can battle all around alongside various nations. Then, other than having its public language, it should not be dismissed that Indonesia has numerous vernaculars. Thusly, work on the use of Bahasa Indonesia just as secure and advance vernaculars which address social tradition of this country. Instruction should give a shifted language collection and a comprehension of which dialects we ought to realize for what reason. This recommends a language strategy that works on the nature of the educational plan, instructing, and learning in state schooling, just as an approach that assists with situating the job of the various dialects in a more sure and secured setting.

Peer Review: The topic of this article is very interesting. The context of the topic is well explained using many sources helping to give an understanding of language policy in Indonesia in the: past, present and future. The use of the image is useful in seeing the different languages in the region. To improve maybe use more neutral language throughout the article.

Peer Assessments
Peer Review 1: The topic of this article is very interesting. The context of the topic is well explained using many sources helping to give an understanding of language policy in Indonesia in the: past, present and future. The use of the image is useful in seeing the different languages in the region. To improve maybe use more neutral language throughout the article.

Peer Review 2: Knowing that Indonesia has a lot of diversity, one of it is language, makes this topic interesting for me. After reading the article, here are some review that I would like to share:

The introduction part has described the background of language in Indonesia clearly but has not shown the summary of the whole article which describes what you will write. It would be better if you could add more information about the whole article in the introduction part.

The overall article are easy to understand. The structure including heading and subheadings are separated in a good way that helps the reader to understand the flow of the article. It is also written in short sentences and using active tenses so it is easier to understand. The picture showing maps of local languages in Indonesia also escalates the readers’ understanding about the language diversity in Indonesia. To develop the article, I think it would be nice if you could explain more about the subheadings witten in the article and add some bridging in between each subheadings to help the readers’ reading flow.

The article’s statements are also provided with diverse and high quality references including references from country context: Indonesia making this article trustworthy. Other good things about this article is that this article also provides a curated wikilinks that helps me as a reader to seek further reading.

Revise

Thanks for the comments. In the introduction to Wikipedia, I will add a summary of the article to make it easier for readers to read this article. In terms of connecting between one heading and another, I will also add it to help readers know the flow of the discussion. I think all the comments help me improve this article's quality

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