User:Hudson1521/Colombian displacement crisis/Scotty175 Peer Review

General info
Hudson1521- Ella
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Strengths of the content added:

I liked the History section, its short and concise and gave me a quick summary of the information I needed to know before reading the article.

How can the content added be improved?

There are no citations added yet, and there is not a lot of information (I'm sure you already know this). I think the stuff you have so far is a great starting point because it lets you build more onto it. For your "rates of Displacement" portion I think you can add some images and graphs to help support your claims and help make it more engaging to the viewers. I also think you can add some statistics under your "gang violence" section to help support your claims.