User:Hudson1521/Far Westside, Syracuse/MatthewLathew Peer Review

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Hudson1521, Miloshi525
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 * User:Hudson1521/Far Westside, Syracuse
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 * Far Westside, Syracuse

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No lead has been added, maybe you can add a sentence of all of the areas in the Far Westside, including Tipperary Hill. The section about demographics is great, really adds context to my understanding of the area. If you can find a colored map of the area relating to the demographics, that could be helpful. The tone is neutral, not sure if you want to remove the word excellent from the sledding hill sentence, it may add a little bias. The sources look good, there's a wide variety, but you may want to find more for the tipperary hill section. I think the article is organized in a clear and concise way. It flows well.