User:HugginsLogan/Woodlouse spider/Gmoore12 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Logan H.

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the first and last sentence should be placed near each other because it provides for a better flow and better read since they both talk about the jaws/bite of the spider. If it is not already mentioned on the current wikipedia page for the Woodlouse spider, I would also put why it has such a powerful bite. Not only that, but I personally would put that the bite only causes a pain and itching sensation for a certain amount of time to humans if you can find that from a reliable source. Also, it may just be an error on my computer, but the references mostly lead to the same page which should be changed because citations and references should come from multiple sources. Gmoore12 (talk) 16:47, 18 October 2021 (UTC) GM