User:Hugh B. Kareful/Ergonomic Hazard/Aimanarashid Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hugh B. Kareful


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hugh%20B.%20Kareful/Ergonomic_Hazard?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ergonomic hazard

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is straightforward, simple and easy to understand. The sections are a good addition to the article. They provide more details on different types of ergonomics. They are balanced in terms of their respective portion of the article. The images added are also very good and describe the topic perfectly.

I would recommend to make sub sections under each types of ergonomics. This might gives readers a better reading experience. The sub sections could be the hazards, the disease, the preventions, and possible solutions.

Overall, the content is well-written, neutral and cited from reliable sources. Sub sections might be something to consider.