User:Hugh Beresford1997/Arabic Music/Rsinthespace Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hugh Beresford


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hugh%20Beresford1997/Arabic_Music?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a good lead that gives reader a basic picture of how Arabic music is like. The lead does not contain too much information but it provides a clear guide if the readers are going to need more into on those points. The added content is gathered from reliable sources and Hugh picked some good resources that help him with completing the insufficient aspects of Arabic music. The content is well-organised and it digs something deeper on each aspects in a logical order. The article turned out to be more stronger with Hugh's edit, and it enhanced the credibility of the article since it picked info from reliable sources.