User:Hugh Beresford1997/Music of Syria/Rsinthespace Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hugh Beresford


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AHugh_Beresford1997%2FMusic_of_Syria&type=revision&diff=1054028916&oldid=1053559783


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead to the article appears to be more detailed than it was before the revision, and it gives more general image of the music background.

The lead also describes the sections clearly so that readers can have a clue of where to get further information.

All the contents are relevant to the topic, and it contains reasonable source where the editor gathered information from.

There can be more relevant images that help people understand the type of music or the instruments used for accomplishing repertoire.