User:Hugheann/Seaweed fertiliser/JaJaBVB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hugheann


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kellyshan31/Seaweed_Fertilizer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Seaweed fertiliser

Evaluate the drafted changes
You all did a great job extending and expaning upon some of the information that was provided on the currrent Wiki page on seaweed fertilizer! Nice use of the in-text links for certain terms throughout the article, and I thought you all did a good job sectioning off the article as well.

Considering you have numerous sub-sections within this article, it may be beneficial for your readers to have an overview section at the top where the "Seaweed Fertilizer" section is located. I might also suggest adding in some figures to serve as visual representations of the information, which can help orientate readers to the main takeways from the text.

I thought the article was well-written, and very inclusive with respect to covering the history, functions, and other dynamics of seaweed fertilizer. There doesn't seem to be much grammar mistakes within the text as well, so it looks like most of the adjustments you may need to make are structural (adding in figures, overview, etc.). Other than that, awesome job folks!