User:Huilinyan/The Battle at Lake Changjin/Danauca Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Huilinyan Battle at Lake Changjin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Huilinyan/The_Battle_at_Lake_Changjin?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a lot of information in the draft that adds to the Wikipedia. The table looks well out together and the photo is helpful in understand the article. There is only one source for such a large amount of information there seems like there should be more. The article is well structured and the lead gives the idea of what is going to be written about. More explanation about the songs could be useful. the content seems reliable and so does the source they have. The table doesn't seem to be complete with multiple things missing from it.