User:Huilinyan/The Battle at Lake Changjin/Tannerfoweraker Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Huilinyan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Huilinyan/The_Battle_at_Lake_Changjin?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Battle at Lake Changjin

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The reviewed article does a very great job adding in extra context and details left out of the original article. To support the information added in they provided a picture that enhances the information. They added music in that was left out of the original article which is very useful. The added information is concise, detailed and relevant to topic.