User:Hunerwithat/Wajeha Al-Huwaider/Bschutz11 Peer Review

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Hunerwithat


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hunerwithat/Wajeha_Al-Huwaider?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wajeha al-Huwaider

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Based on the sandbox draft of the article, this article is off to a great start on being improved. As of right now, the article is very structurally sound in that it follows a good chronological order of al-Huwaider’s life. I do feel that as the article progresses and becomes longer in length, it would be beneficial to add different sections/headers to divide the content better, such as by issues that she’s worked on, a section about international praise as mentioned in the lead, et cetera. Noting the international praise, it is mentioned in the lead but the only place I can find it in the article body is with the comparison to Rosa Parks and her being published in the Washington Post. If this remains in the lead, I feel like it would be beneficial to expand on this a bit. The sources you have currently are a good base to build upon, and I found a couple more links that you may find useful:

https://www.thenation.com/article/archive/saudi-human-rights-activist-wajeha-al-huwaider-sentenced-prison/#axzz2WykAYVHI

https://www.thenation.com/article/archive/conversation-saudi-womens-rights-campaigner-wajeha-al-huwaider/#axzz2Wcfn6kEH - interview with her

https://www.hrw.org/news/2013/06/17/saudi-arabia-activists-convicted-answering-call-help# - Human Rights Watch

http://edition.cnn.com/2009/WORLD/meast/07/10/women.saudi/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8GiTnb33wE

https://www.cbc.ca/radio/asithappens/as-it-happens-tuesday-edition-1.4307609/i-am-so-happy-activist-reacts-to-end-of-ban-on-female-drivers-in-saudi-arabia-1.4308348

I do wonder if there is more recent information/work that al-Huwaider has done? I did find the above article about her reaction to Saudi women getting to drive, so that may be one thing to mention. You did a great job including her quotations and showing her views and contributions to the various movements she’s partaken in. I would also be curious as to whether there are photos elsewhere on the internet of her that you can use (copyright issues and all) other than the one of the cabinet member? All in all, great work!