User:Hunter.Annen/Magnetogenetics/Willstucki Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Hunter.Annen
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Magnetogenetics

Lead evaluation
The lead is put together very well it introduces what Magnetogenetics is, what it is used for in medicine and possible subcategories that can be talked about. The only thing that concerns me is there is a lot of content but not very many sources present. The lead wasn't edited by my peer

Content evaluation
All of the content is very relevant all relating back to magnetogenetics. My peer added 2 sources and 2 lines describing the organisms and how they relate to there environments

Tone and balance evaluation
The content posted was not being persuasive or bias. It was just stating information taken from the articles and was presented very well.

Sources and references evaluation
The reference that was added looks to be a good secondary source reference. Information isn't copied word for word from the source.

Organization evaluation
Where the information is placed relative to the section is not very good. It just seems like the 2 statements were placed randomly between another 2 sentences that went together. This does need to be changed for overall clarity.