User:Hunterambrose/Ecological evolutionary developmental biology/Rimanol Peer Review

General info
Hunterambrose
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hunterambrose/Ecological evolutionary developmental biology - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ecological evolutionary developmental biology - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I don't see much in the sandbox, so this feedback is based on what I see in the current Wiki article.

Lead: In the sentence talking about climate change, add in TSD so that it can flow in a better way, or rewrite that sentence cause it kind of is just there.

The article mentions temperature dependence a lot. Add in examples of other forms of environmental factors that affect development. Also, look and see if other aspects of climate change are affecting development. This could apply to altered ocean life development due to rising ocean temperatures and decreasing salinity, etc. if available.

There are a lot of very specific examples from mainly primary articles with little lead-in information on what each of these topics is truly about. Add in more general information on what each of these topics is and how they affect development. Try to focus on recent reviews for each of the topics (development plasticity, symbiosis, etc).

The content currently in the article is kind of choppy, doesn't flow very well, and abruptly switches between examples in the same paragraph. Rewriting would be beneficial for reader comprehension.