User:Hunterelizabethhill/The Last Book in the Universe/NaudikaW Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Hunterelizabethhill


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hunterelizabethhill/The_Last_Book_in_the_Universe?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Last Book in the Universe

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * The lead content has not been updated so far, but I do see the copied text and I think that's a good starting point on what you want to add. Maybe if there's any major nominations or if it's related to another work, then that might help the Lead.

Content


 * Nothing is added to the original content, everything is copied word for word. I imagine this is your planning stage, but the plot seems too detailed to add much too. Major themes could be a part you develop because there is barely anything on the original wiki page, especially since your educationworld reference focuses on themes.

Sources and References


 * All the links work, and the Urbana source works well with credibility. I'm not sure if the studyguide for the book is a reliable source, as it's not an educational review or anything.

Overal Impressions


 * Overall, I think you just need to add stuff in there using the links that you have.