User:Huntermd33/Summer Internship for Indigenous Peoples in Genomics (SING)/Rav holmes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Huntermd33


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Huntermd33/Summer_Internship_for_Indigenous_Peoples_in_Genomics_%28SING%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Does not currently exist

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Given there is no current article available to add to the lead provided a brief explanation of the internship. A reader would be able to have an understanding of what SING is and what's its purpose even if they don't have pervious knowledge. The lead overall is consisting of information that is needed because there is no prior information and its all neutral content. Not once was a certain section seemed to be over/under represented. This draft is a good start for this article.