User:Hurlinator20/Battle At Pozo Hediondo/Noahjack2001 Peer Review

This a good start to explaining more details about this war. Maybe write a little more about the raid, why and who did they raid? also adding more to the prelude will help the rest of the article. I like your references and maybe you could add a map of the war in the geography part of your article. I like the use of footnotes and the links to other Wikipedia articles. Your are on the right track and good luck with the rest of the article

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