User:Huskyhero/Bridle Trails State Park/Jasonguoo Peer Review

General info
Huskyhero
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AHuskyhero%2FBridle_Trails_State_Park&diff=1218671651&oldid=1218667415
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a great update to the current version of the article. I really like that the content added was neutral and added value to the overall understanding of the state park. As the original article briefly talked about the history of the state park, the changes brought a thorough understanding of the land that this state park sits on. The added sentences flow well with the original content in chronological order. My only concern is that the article has a heavy focus on the history of this state park. It's important to know, but the audience may want to hear about how they can best utilize the state park for recreation. For instance, I think it would be beneficial to include information about hiking trails in the parking. Great work on the edits! ~Jason Guo

Huskyhero response below:

Thank you so much for your peer review! I will make sure to add more about how the park is best used recreationally and activities that people can partake in.

~Huskyhero