User:Huskyhero/Bridle Trails State Park/Odelach Peer Review

General info
HuskyHero
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Huskyhero/Bridle Trails State Park
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Bridle Trails State Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
As I started going through the draft by HuskyHero, I looked at the current form of the article versus the first and they did a significant part of the history. They did a really good job of not only adding a large part connecting to how it changed through times but also provided all information in a neutral tone. Luckily, the state park did help in publishing more current information about how it formed more than just the measurements. Each of their citations are not only credible but are easily backed up by their sources,

The organization of the article was well formed! I believe a way to continue to add onto this article could be providing more description of the park and more historical facts of events and communities involved in this area. The content provided is mostly up to date but could also use more work continuing to add new things that may be important to know about the area in 2024.

The main Lead of the article that is largely measurements and brief description. A way you can improve this section and lead to a stronger hook would be to maybe give a brief description of the park itself. Talk about the main significance of its foundation and more about weather and environment.

Huskyhero response below:

Thank you so much for your peer review! I will definitely try to add more of a description of the park and and more historical facts too. I'll make sure to add a better hook for the lead like you said.

~ Huskyhero