User:Huzmir1014/2016 Fukushima earthquake/Amoreland22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Huzmir1014 (and their group members)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Huzmir1014/2016_Fukushima_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2016 Fukushima earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems you have a solid idea of the additions you will be making to your article and are very specific about it which was helpful for me while peer reviewing. You did a great job on backing up all your proposed edits to information already included in the article with new sources you've found. The proposed addition to the lead section of the fact that there were no reported deaths is great and backed up by a reliable source so good job on finding a way to elaborate on key information. Since a lot of what you're planning is adding in new related information (such as "Did You Feel It" data in the impact section) or changing figures, I would make sure to double check the reliability/validity of the original sources for the article to make sure your changes are indeed more up to date or correct and therefore necessary. In your impact section you mention the possible addition of a damages subsection. That was what was going to be my main suggestion for you so I definitely would urge creating that, it could even be its own section from what I've seen in other articles. Overall I would just find more information about damages and consider adding any new general facts you find to existing sections, otherwise your plan seems well organized and your intentions are clear!