User:Huzmir1014/2016 Fukushima earthquake/Bullpenboys19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Huzmir1014


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Huzmir1014/2016 Fukushima earthquake


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2016 Fukushima earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
I cannot tell for sure entirely as it seems that the original article has already been changed to what is in the sandbox. That makes it a little tricky to see what to improve.

- Mentioned that some believe it to be an aftershock of the 2011 earthquake. Explore that more, i.e. whether other experts agree or disagree with this statement and what it would mean if it were true.

- The Fukushima Nuclear Plant was brought up here too. Maybe look into how this plant is adjusting given that it seems to be getting hit by earthquakes semi regularly.

- The part on tsunami is a bit confusing. It was mentioned that waves reached no more than a few meters, then later said enormous 33ft 500mph ones were recorded. This needs to be explained.

- Has a prompt for damages already, I'd encourage to absolutely do this, looking at things beyond just local stuff like buildings and into things like migration, cultural impact, regional employment sources, etc.

- In general y'all are off to a great start, keep it up. There is not a whole lot more I'd suggest to do given the stage in writing!