User:Huzmir1014/2016 Fukushima earthquake/Marysarkis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Huzmir1014


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Huzmir1014/2016 Fukushima earthquake
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2016 Fukushima earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article I am reviewing definitely has a strong start. The current version of article itself is not very detailed, right now it only has three main body sections: earthquake, tsunami, and impact. Though within each of the three edits and additions have been made by Huzmir1014, which look good so far. In the lead section the edited version explaining the injuries and deaths is a strong addition, because that is key information when learning about an earthquake. On the earthquake section there was additional information added about the depth of the earthquake which is another good addition. The tsunami section additions looked good as well. Moving forward though I would recommend maybe adding some information about the history of tsunamis in this area. Since the article focus is the earthquake and there is a shift to the the tsunami this may help the transition/flow of the article. Under the impact section I feel the additional information about USGS is very strong. USGS has been proven as a strong resource when looking into information about earthquakes. USGS also has lots of helpful maps/diagrams which would be a great addition to the article.

Though overall as a whole the current version of the article is not very detailed. A possibility is adding a whole another section. Some possibilities could be: a history section or an aftermath section. Providing more background information about the location or earthquakes in this area of Japan. The article does have an impacts section of the earthquake, though it could be edited and separated to have an impacts section as well as an aftermath section. Overall, the additions to the article thus far are looking good, and some more additions/sections will help the overall article become even stronger going forward.