User:Huzmir1014/2016 Fukushima earthquake/PG2025 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Huzmir1014


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Huzmir1014/2016_Fukushima_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2016 Fukushima earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking over this group's sandbox, it seems that revisions to the article have been outlined, but not made. The suggestions made by the group so far add good value to the original article and make the original wording/content clearer and more correct. One recommendation I would have for the group would be to add more pictures to the article as this would add value. More maps or images of the damage caused would be a good start. The original article seems pretty well developed, but the group has done a good job so far with making revisions. Besides just changing what has already been added by the original author, the group should also try to find lesser-known information that may have been left out by the author. The group should really consider adding a separate damage section to their sandbox, and this should be different than the impact section. Even if no damage was caused, the group should say this. Overall, great start! The changes you have proposed so far are good! Keep going and also try to add new information and images to your article. Can't wait to see the finished product!

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