User:Huzmir1014/2016 Fukushima earthquake/Surfer616147 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Huzmir1014


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Huzmir1014/2016_Fukushima_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2016 Fukushima earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
lead review: interesting idea of editing existing information and adjusting it according to other sources. However, it is too short. Need more info on lead review then just correction edits to already existing article sentences.

Content: content for earthquake and tsunami is decent. Earthquake section could use more information to flesh out the article. Could use more than just 3 additional references in order to add unbiased information AND support current content. reduce the use of biased viewpoints such as "according to some" and "possible adding" in final draft.

Tone and balance: earthquake and lead need to be fleshed out more in order to balance out the sections. Tsunami and Impact could use extra additional information aswell.

overall: article is well thought out and planned for formulating what should be inputted into final draft. Needs some extra information and slight revisions in order to reach the next stage.